Sunday, 8 November 2009

Kaspar Layout

My attempt at a layout drawing, based on this John K sketch.


JohnK said...

Nice, but It's toned down

and when objects go off the page (like his arms) - aim the lines so they look like they are still solid forms that will continue even where we can't actually see them

don't just let the lines vaguely trail off

also - fur--

after constructing the form under the fur, don't then cut into it with jagged fur lines, undoing the construction

that cuts holes in his arms

the fur is on top of the form

why not just fix those things right on top of the original drawing (yours)

rather than redrawing it from scratch?

John said...

Cool, I'll have a revised drawing up here soon. :)